what's your solution to the sentence?Super pedantic, but I get irritated with writing that imparts agency on evolution:
Rhinos may have evolved in areas where readily available plant life was tough, but neither they nor their teeth consciously chose to change in response. The ones that were better at chewing tough plants got more food and thus survived.
I guess their way was shorter, but I'd like to see more care put into writing about evolution so that its more comprehensible.
There are many ways to rewrite that sentence to be more accurate. Here is one:what's your solution to the sentence?
Makes total sense to me. A lot of what we think various things are useful for is shaped by experience and conventional wisdom; we don't think of tooth as a toolmaking material because why would we? But if your entire existence is hunting large, angry megafauna because it's a big risk and a big reward, you're going to find uses for that critter. It's highly unlikely that they fucked with the real gristly bits and offcuts much, but claws, teeth, and usefully shaped bones are easy to remove as you strip an animal down and very useful.But some of the items in a Neanderthal’s toolkit seem surprising and unusual to us now because of how the world has changed.
I don't think that phrasing does imply agency to evolution.Super pedantic, but I get irritated with writing that imparts agency on evolution:
Rhinos may have evolved in areas where readily available plant life was tough, but neither they nor their teeth consciously chose to change in response. The ones that were better at chewing tough plants got more food and thus survived.
I guess their way was shorter, but I'd like to see more care put into writing about evolution so that its more comprehensible.
Agreed. I thought it had real bite.This article was absolutely bang-on. Really struck a nerve for me. Truly a smashing effort.
We’re learning that Neanderthals made and used items from a surprising range of materials. Some aren’t that surprising: wood for digging sticks and spears, plant fibers for string, grasses and leaves for bedding, hides for clothes or bags, birch tar for glue or antiseptic, and antler or deer bone for scraping, knapping, drilling, and hide-working—even shells or eagle talons for jewelry.
"use every part of the buffalo" etcIt's highly unlikely that they fucked with the real gristly bits and offcuts much, but claws, teeth, and usefully shaped bones are easy to remove as you strip an animal down and very useful.
Keep boiling and they turn into a pretty dang useful glue, too.bones and tendons turn into soup if you can't use them for fiber or tools
There is nothing whatsoever wrong or misleading about the statement in the article.Super pedantic, but I get irritated with writing that imparts agency on evolution:
Rhinos may have evolved in areas where readily available plant life was tough, but neither they nor their teeth consciously chose to change in response. The ones that were better at chewing tough plants got more food and thus survived.
I guess their way was shorter, but I'd like to see more care put into writing about evolution so that it’s more comprehensible.
Interestingly enough - and I say this as an interested nerd, not an expert - I think the consensus is that megafauna hunters didn't use every part of the mastodon. They used the choicest, most energy dense parts and the parts that were useful and could be turned into shelter, tools, whatever, and generally left the rest, because they had no way to preserve it and knew the carcass would attract scavengers."use every part of the buffalo" etc
bones and tendons turn into soup if you can't use them for fiber or tools
When it's (!) in a comments section, I attribute -- in my charitable way -- at least some of the confusions to auto-corrupt which, along with AI, is one of the world's more annoying innovations.Ultra pedantic, but I get irritated with people confusing its and it's.
When one has written four entire sentences, proofreading them would be a kind gesture.
As a writer, I agree with the "I'd like to see more care put into writing" sentiment.